Hi Riley I really like your describing for your ice sculpture. I really like how you put similes and your story maybe next time you could use full stops for sentences. But i really like it
Hi Riley I really like your image it made me laugh a bit. It reminded me when my friend sent me a funny picture. Mabye next time you should add some more writing.
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Hi Riley I really like your describing for your ice sculpture. I really like how you put similes and your story maybe next time you could use full stops for sentences. But i really like it
ReplyDeleteHi Riley I really like your image it made me laugh a bit. It reminded me when my friend sent me a funny picture. Mabye next time you should add some more writing.
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